以我跟政府打交道的经验,长文根本没人看,写的简短些效果更佳。随便写写,仅供参考. Just make your point and make peace.
Greetings from Parents,
Your new policy proposal sucks. Luckily, you have not done anything that we cannot forgive. Not yet. Think twice and think again. You only get one shot. One shot to do the right thing. One shot to be fair and square. One shot to make it right when you know you are wrong.
Anything that involves applicants and applications, ranging from employment to election, from cadet to hockey, is competition selective.
You know, we know it. Everybody knows it.
Why the Specialty Programs should be any different?
The crew and passengers on May Flower did not win free tickets to the new world. The first settlers were selected. Their opportunities were earned, not drawn.
This is how it worked for our ancestors, from generation to generation. And it makes us what we are.
Intelligence, Handwork, and Positive Thought
These things worked for any programs that strive to pick the best of the best, not the luckiest of the luckiest.
No brainstorm is required to change these benchmarks. They are gold, tried and true.
Save the creativity part of your proposal for our kids. They are going to need it.
Call me at XXX-XXX-XXXX so we can talk. Just call me or I will get people to call you.